We have come up with the following .....
Soon they were at the pond. Misty’s eyes lit up seeing fish jumping up from the surface of the pond. She ran to the edge of the pond and started flapping her paw about hoping to catch a fish. Marly briskly walked over to Bear and Bob.
“Hey Bear, come here! “ mimed Marly.
“Is the plan working?” asked Bear.
“Yes it is,” said Marly with a smirk on her face
“Good,” whispered Marly.
from jess and Ruby :)
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Angus and Bailey
8/19/2013 08:24:39 pm
Hi Class
We think the story should continue this way.
They skipped along, but all along the trail, Marley had her whiskers crossed.
‘Come on Misty’, said Marley who was anxious to get to the pond.
‘OK Marley,’ replied Misty.
Just then Misty heard a slight rustling in the bushes. Marley hastily distracted Misty with a fish.
Misty happily chewed on her fish while Marley and the bush chatted.
From Bailey & Angus
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Abigail
8/20/2013 07:39:11 pm
I think it should go like this.
"You know I wasn’t quite sure it was Bear and Bob outside just then" sneered Marley.
"I am" said Misty " I could see them going to the pond"
"Lets beat them then" said Marley.
So they went to the pond. It was quite peaceful. Bob and Bear weren’t there. But they did not know that Bear ran on ahead and hid in the bushes. Bob was in no hurry so he walked slowly behind.
Marley and Misty waited for a minute or so before Bob came. As soon as Bob came Misty and Marley shouted "WE GOT HERE BEFORE YOU" Bob was surprised to hear Mist and Marley shout that they got there before him.Bob said "Why does it matter if you got here before me?" Misty mutters something Bob couldn’t here.
I think that should be the next bit of our story.
From Abigail
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Kabisha and Madeleen
8/21/2013 12:46:48 pm
“Imagine how tasty the fish will be!” exclaimed Misty. “Yeh, I can’t Imagine really,” said Marley with a mysterious look on her face.
So they went closer and closer to the pond to see if there was any tasty fish.
And Marley winked at the bush. “ 3,2,1!” shouted Marley and Bear jumped out of the bushes and pushed Misty onto a rock in the middle of the pond.
“OWCH!” cried Misty. Bob looked up and tied up Bear whilst squashing Marley and KILLING her! Then Bob took misty to the vet to see if she had any bad injuries. When they came back from the vet Misty went to sleep and so did Bob.
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Kabisha And Madeleen
8/21/2013 12:55:48 pm
Hi Class
Here is something we came up with
“Imagine how tasty the fish will be!” exclaimed Misty.
“Yeh, I can’t Imagine really,” said Marley with a mysterious look on her face.
So they went closer and closer to the pond to see if there was any tasty fish.
And Marley winked at the bush.
“ 3,2,1!” shouted Marley
And Bear jumped out of the bushes and pushed Misty onto a rock in the middle of the pond.
“OWCH!” cried Misty.
Bob looked up and tied up Bear whilst squashing Marley and KILLING her! Then Bob took misty to the vet to see if she had any bad injuries. When they came back from the vet, Misty went to sleep and so did Bob.
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Kabisha
8/26/2013 02:51:25 pm
Hi Class,
Ihave improved my part and finished it off:
“Imagine how tasty the fish will be!” exclaimed Misty.
“Yeh, I can’t Imagine really,” said Marley with a mysterious look on her face.
“Why don’t you go up there and get a head start on the fish?” Asked Marley.
“Good idea!” Shouted Misty as she ran to the pond.
As she went Marley had a talk with Bear. They were talking about pushing Misty into the pond. So they went closer and closer to the pond to see if Misty was there yet.
And Marley winked at the bush.
“ 3,2,1!” shouted Marley
And Bear jumped out of the bushes and pushed Misty onto a rock in the middle of the pond.
“OWCH!” cried Misty.
Bob looked up and tied up Bear whilst squashing Marley and KILLING her! Then Bob took misty to the vet to see if she had any bad injuries. When they came back from the vet Bob made Bear apologise to Misty and told him that he would not get any dessert. And Misty was happy with that!
I hope you have enjoyed!
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